5.48am
by @theodamus
NSFWLiner Notes
Some nights I can’t sleep no matter what I do. Friday night was one of those, so when I gave up and got up at 5.48am I stood in the kitchen and had a bit of a musical sook about it, wrote the lyrics in about 5 minutes in some kind of delirium, attempted a voice note of the melody which sounded more like a drunk frog croaking in monotone, and eventually got it mostly recorded later in the day between nap and gig I was playing that night.
I do have another guitar part for it in my head but I’m already stalled on another song I wrote days before this one and a couple of collabs to get to so I need to get it up and move on, it’s punk, it’s fawm, it’s fine. Here’s to getting some sleep!
Drums are a garageband placeholder, guitars and vocals me.
#punk #poppunk
Lyrics
Get a fucking girlfriend
Get a job
Get a haircut
Give me all your money
Give me reasons
Give me credit
Everything beginning I’m not ready for it
Everything already over
I ruined it
Singing through the window I will scream right back at you
Sugar in the line the petrol turns to glue
There is nothing I can do
There is nothing you can say
What a beautiful day
Get a fucking grip
Get fucking wise
Get me started
Give me more of it
Give me an inch
Give me answers
Everything beginning I’m not ready for it
Everything already over
I ruined it
Singing through the window and I'll scream right back at you
Sugar in the line the petrol turns to glue
There is nothing I can do
There is nothing you can say
What a beautiful day
Comments
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the time of day you had your rant!
And when I mean rant, I mean it in a good way
Because that is how a lot of great music begins
Good job!
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beautiful day." Harmony is great. Music is great. Well done.
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Love the raw 'tell it as it really is' vibe. Cheers 😁
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Once again, you blow my mind with the way you conceptualize songwriting, harmony and do it in a way that feels like, yes, this is what music is!
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It's not very punk to talk about anaphora, but you use it well. You articulate the word 'fucking' in a way that makes it seem appropriate in its own right, rather than an intensifier. Interesting.
And, of course, I enjoy the irony of 'what a beautiful day', especially at the end, where the song just sorta stops giving a fuck and trails off on a sentiment you normally hear shouted from the rooftops. Brilliant.
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Love the stream of consciousness, the sneer, and the economy and energy of it all. Gets right to the point and drives it home in the tour van.