FAWM: "You've Done Me Wrong "

You've Done Me Wrong

3 weeks ago by @tcelliott

You've Done Me Wrong

tcelliott

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Liner Notes

#blues #acoustic #acousticblues #acousticonetake #cliche

Playing around and this popped out. It's not that it's bad, necessarily, but there's not much originality to it. I guess if this is my low point then I'm doing pretty darn well.

Lyrics

You've been drinking whiskey
You chase it with beer
You never missed me
When I wasn't here
You part all night
All night long
You've done me wrong

You've been out on the town
Out on the street
Yeah, You've been kissing
Every man you meet
You party all night
All night long
You've done me wrong

You say you never loved me
Not one time
'Cause you got friends
All standing in a line
You party all night
All night long
You've done me wrong

So I changed the locks
On my front door
You said you didn't need me
So I don't want you no more
You party all night
All night long
You've done me wrong

You party all night
All night long
You've done me wrong

Comments

@lbrewington 2d

Call it what you want, but if are saying this is your worst best attempt then sign me up. Fan of the guitar solos and this one has two. Also the blues riff coming out of the you've done me wrong is good. As far as theme, call it cliche, but I think it's something we have all had to feel and deal, so very relatable. My favorite line is "'cause you got friends/ all standing in a line". Also, the opening couplet is good, I mean the mention of whiskey and beer? Maybe just me haha, I'll take a double.

@paul_pedersen 5d

You certainly got my head bobbing on this song. Not sure it will settle down. If it doesn't, then "you've done me wrong."

@guatecoop 1w

Well, you certainly do this style well. I love the drawn out vocal parts that let your voice shine and stretch out a little. Great song!

@chasingandromeda 2w

Love the guitar work on this one. Nice vocal as well.

@squirrelhavenstudios 2w

That's some pretty good acoustic blues guitar playing in just one take. I agree: if that's your low point, you're doing pretty great. Anybody would be happy with this one, I think. Nice work!