Try A Little More

by @newukenewyork

Liner Notes

“Try A Little More” - #fawm 50/90 2024 song 50

I got off count somewhere but I think I fixed it, and with this song, I have completed 50 songs in 90 days (it’s day 63) and I’m really happy to have arrived at this milestone for the second summer in a row.

I haven’t quite hit my goal, though, of completing all my lyric drafts from last year — and now I have four new lyric drafts from this year I’m hoping to get to before October 2nd, as well.

I wrote this one thinking of someone who wouldn’t want to be named — when I get on their bad side I sometimes have a difficult time understanding why the stakes seem so high, but I can imagine them just wishing I’d try a little harder to communicate the way that works for them. So I wrote these lyrics from that person to me.

The melody/vocals and the outro need a little tweak to settle, but here’s a demo.

2 lyric drafts left to finish from 2023…

All my originals: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6mTUlPL-MmAm45IMVgat1necrh2mGnT6&si=sAdXP581ZNU__9rn

#fuc #acoustic #acousticonetake #ukulele #personwithukulele #onetake #girlwithukulele #singersongwriter

Lyrics

It’s all relative but it’s crystal
What’s right you can’t change on the flip
Don’t ask me to suffer fools gladly
I’m not getting off on your trip

I get that you don’t get me
But I don’t know why you can’t
Try a little harder
Try a little softer
Try a little closer
Try a little farther
Give me what I’m asking for
Try a little more

I want what I want when I want it
And that isn’t up for debate
I’m gonna go off til I get it
I’m not gonna shoulder the blame

CHORUS

I suspect it all, sister — no offense to you
The world is full of grifters and I keep eyes on my crew
Your brand of “nice” you can take outside
Don’t try me — I am not up for the ride

CHORUS

Comments

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I'm still your #1 Fan. ;-)

Another really terrific song with a flawless vocal--why aren't you A Big Star yet?!!!! ❤️
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Great narrative perspective and a good way of dealing with this sort of frustration I think? Nice melody and song as always!
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i like it when someone writes a kiss off song from the other persons point of view. dylan once hinted that his song it aint me babe" wasnt about him putting down a hopeful love mate..it was he who is the rejected "babe" in the song. for me, it makes a more interesting song when the writers take a point of view that is unflattering to themselves,
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Woohoo!! So glad you reached the goal, you are a very prolific, talented, and skilled songwriter. Keep on going!
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Congratulations on getting to 50, and with another great dong. I'm looking forward to hearing what you post in the next 27 days.
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I love that chorus. Encapsulates miscommunication so damn well. Nicely played and sung, too.
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Hey, congrats on reaching 50 songs this year! Another really nice melody. I can tell that you’re working to make your songs stand apart from each other. This one is really soulful, and has some nice unexpected notes. Way too stretch, and a great theme to “win” on.
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