Ain't About Tryin'

by @jwhanberry

Skirmish: Totally Titular, Volume 2... (@robinleaf)
Ain't About Tryin'
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Liner Notes

#skirmish #electronic #fawmtronica #titular

Synths: Vital

Guitars: Guild D-25

Constructive criticism is always welcome. Tell me all about it!
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Note: Skirmish: 1 hour or so to write and record
©2024 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
All Rights Reserved

Lyrics

Ain't About Tryin'

It ain't about tryin'
Gotta get on through it
No use in cryin'
Just get up and do it.
Say you got a bad card
Too bad you drew it
Nobody buyin' excuses
'cause you're sorry you blew it

Ya think it's complicated
Don't misconstrue it
Can't be replicated
Until you subdue it
You say your frustrated
You can get used to it
That's just baby talk
Time you outgrew it

©2024 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
All Rights Reserved

Comments

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The subs caught my attention from the get go and I was transfixed the whole way through. The second verse is GOLD, love the rhyming scheme and @wobbiewobbit is so right... The last two lines are classic :)
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It’s a good title! I like the vocal delivery and the skittering beat.
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Nice skirmish! This lyric is great - same rhyme every other line - wow! Nice backdrop, too.
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That music track is a perfect backdrop for your spoken vocal delivery. I like your pointed lyric and how you convey the message.
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cool groove. I like little short songs, might be a sign of the times but i am all for it. nice wordplay, love the payoff last two lines.
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