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I Pray

10 weeks ago by @paul_pedersen · @lyricslinger

I Pray

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Perhaps this is a religious song for those who don't follow a religion. Simon Wright posted the lyrics and I had to have some fun with them.

Lyrics

I pray that I don't get sucked in by religion
I pray that my mind and heart remain strong
Though Death will grow close with scythely precision
I pray that I'll still know right from wrong

I don't need a book or threats of damnation
To care for those in need or make a donation
I don't need a preacher intent on saving souls
From the wrath of his god - that schtick is so damn old

I pray that the new gods go the way of the old ones
I pray that they don't spark any more wars
Though streets burn with rising rebellion
I'll place my faith in reason and laws

I don't need a book or threats of damnation
To care for those in need or make a donation
I don't need a preacher intent on saving souls
From the wrath of his god - that schtick is so damn old

I won't belittle those who find comfort
I wish them sweet dreams as they head to their lord
But I wish that we'd all just worship nature
And our place within it, be of one accord

I don't need a book or threats of damnation
To care for those in need or make a donation
I don't need a preacher intent on saving souls
From the wrath of his god - that schtick is so damn old

Comments

@greengrassgirl 2w

I was exploring @lyricslinger's page when I saw that you had also been captivated by this lyric. Love your rendition; it makes the message even more meaningful.

@kahlo2013 9w

I really liked the lyric when I read it before and this melody and flow is a wonderful delivery that moves the message along perfectly. I love the expression in the vocals!

@carroll 10w

Good rendition

@andrea 10w

I agree, you do not need religion to be a good person. This is well written, a strong message with some humor mixed it. Love the catchy melodies and lighthearted vocals. Super enjoyable song! Great collab.

@jerrypettit 10w

You may not have a choice on these issues, depending on how the election goes.

You and @lyricslinger may even find yourselves under arrest for this song. :-)

That said, I DID love the lyrics and you know I always love your songs/singing, Paul. ❤️

@billwhite51 10w

a witty missive against the pretensions of todays quasi-religious power elite who use fear to manipulate our attitudes toward their evil machinations.

@donna 10w

Words after my own heart. (-:
As always, a tight, cohesive, spot-on lyric from Simon, coupled with a creative, catchy vocal and musical performance.
Fine collaboration. (-:

@roddy 10w

What an intro! Then the relaxed, cool acoustic song. It all rolls along perfectly. Wise lyrics.

@lyricslinger 10w

Thanks @paul_pedersen ! Love it. The organ at the start and end are inspired choices!

@gm7 10w

Ha..a .hymnal sounding anti anti hymnal song. My God, you had fun with this.lol. well done Paul.

@davidtaro 10w

Excellent anti-hymn, so many great lines here but particularly love ‘scythely precision’, the use of the word ‘schtick’ and the line about not belittling those who do believe (which I think is an important counterpoint to make). Paul, as @hyssop says, that organ intro is inspired, and then your trademark bounce and lightness of touch shines through in the rest of the track. Well done both!

@hyssop 10w

I love the organ intro & then the switch up! This is a great collab- well crafted lyrics and catchy music. Props to you both, it's a wonderful song!

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