Breaking

by @newukenewyork

Liner Notes

“Breaking” - #fawm 50/90 2024 original song 2

For Judson Memorial Church’s “The Q in Question / Queering As an Act of Constant Curiosity” series: song 3/6. Week 3: Queering Our Heroes.

Here’s a new song draft for my third week of writing around the current sermon and service series from my friend Rev. Micah Bucey @revmicahb and all the staff and artists at @judsonchurchnyc Judson Memorial Church in Greenwich Village. This week we were celebrating Pride in NYC, and I was inspired by the readings and what was shared, as well as the ancestors and saints whose images and memories and legacies surrounded us.

Note on the idea of “queer,” in the words of Bell Hooks, this is “‘queer' not as being about who you're having sex with (that can be a dimension of it); but 'queer' as being about the self that is at odds with everything around it and that has to invent and create and find a place to speak and to thrive and to live.”

All my originals: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6mTUlPL-MmAm45IMVgat1necrh2mGnT6&si=sAdXP581ZNU__9rn

#fuc #acoustic #acousticonetake #ukulele #personwithukulele #onetake #girlwithukulele #singersongwriter #mortality #midemfoke #americanasati

Lyrics

The bats come like a breeze
Flying foxes in the night
We are lying on a blanket
In the grass, feeling all right
You don’t need another hero
I don’t want another war
This world keeps making angels
And I wonder who they’re for

We are the losers and the winners
Heroes, saints, and sinners
No one’s flying to save us
From the trouble that’s making us
We break
And we survive the breaking

You sing under your breath
But I didn’t catch the words
And I hope we last forever
Even as our edges blur
You don’t need to be a martyr
I don’t want to fall asleep
The bats are circling back
The dark is wide and deep

CHORUS

Isn’t this a miracle?
It spins and we don’t fall off
Aren’t you so wonderful
My heart just drops

CHORUS

Comments

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Love the unexpected chord changes ... great mix of light and dark. Vocals fab, as always, and the lyrics are insightful. An anthem for the outsider! I really like "don’t want to fall asleep/
The bats are circling back."
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the chord progression feels so uplifting and have such an effect and affect combined with your hopeful-sad lyrics! this couplet hit me like a rock:

"This world keeps making angels
And I wonder who they’re for"

kudos!
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Really poignant, and I love the imagery and the back and forth between big questions and little joys. What a cool melody, I really enjoyed all the little unexpected twists it takes. Pretty and sad and still hopeful at the same time - you did a lot with a relatively short song. :)
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Wow! Your voice is better than ever. Great job on this--and I love, love, love the lyrics. Looking forward to a ton more from you!
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Wonderfully sung! And as always really good lyrical performance!
I love especially the lines about angels!
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Beautiful song and so well sung! I like the intimacy of the story setting and was moved by the lyric "You don’t need another hero, I don’t want another war".
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Lovely, sad. and gorgeous! Nicely performed as well.
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Your verse melody is giving me old time nostalgic music vibes - really beautiful. Wonderful lyrics, gorgeous vocals and a lovely acoustic one take performance!
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this topical update on the human condition is blessed with a gorgeous melody flowing through some nice changes. some impressive poetry lifts it all like a literary space station floating circles around this magnetic globe.
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Such a wonderful chord progression and lovely melody that is perfect for the beautiful sentiment of the lyric. Love those vocal lifts. Great to hear you again!
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