A Child Who Grew Up

by @jinx · @fileformat

Liner Notes

I'd been playing with this guitar riff for a couple of days without really knowing what to do with it. But then, just in time to rescue me from stagnation, my postcard from @fileformat for the #PostcardChallenge arrived!

Front:
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Back:
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The front features an artistic depiction of a book in chains, with a quote from Frederick Douglass: "Once you learn to read you will be forever free". On the back, @fileformat wrote: "Ordinary people can never fall over walls, because they never dare climb high enough to see what is beyond the walls."

These are some pretty great song seeds, and I rapidly started getting an idea of what I wanted to do with them... but it ended up going in a completely different direction! I was surprised, but hey, that's creativity for you. I used the guitar melody I'd been noodling around with, and wrote what I first thought was just going to be a "scratch lyric" to be improved later – then all of a sudden decided I liked it after all, and hit record. Boom.

#acoustic #guitar #GenderRoles #folk #indiefolk

Lyrics

Once there was a child
Who fell into a library
And never got out again

Once there was a child
Who learned to climb up walls
And was never contained again

Once there was a child
Who grew up

And then there was a boy
Who got teased for reading
So he closed his books and learned to play rough

And there was a girl
Told not to tear her pretty clothes
By climbing, so she stayed on the ground

Once there was a child
Who grew up

And now there’s a man
So scared of being a man
He never understood the rulebook

And there’s a woman
Enraged by being a woman
But she’s too weak to break the chains

But he used to read too
And she used to climb too

Comments

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Oh I say. Came here randomly and was really impressed—the atmosphere and the mental imagery resonate very vividly.
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Great lyrics. Your voice sounds great. So quiet and beautiful
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Wow! I love this haunting song. You created such an amazing gorgeous song inspired by the postcard! Love your gentle guitar and beautiful melody and phrasing as you deliver the poignant lyrics with such lovely vocals. Powerful. Compelling. Brilliant.
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Love the lyrical start to this. Hooked me right away and I thoroughly enjoyed reading along to your voice on this one. Chilling and poignant narrative. The pacing and tempo of the song is perfect and helps convey the emotion. Really beautiful work on this one @jinx
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Beautiful sentiments. The first part of the song really grabs the audience, drawing us in to the important points you are making. Excellent!
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Libraries and trashing traditional gender roles, I am in! The opening two stanzas are great and really hook you in to the song. What a fab post card and prompt well done both!
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I like how we see both sides: the climber and the climb-less, the reader and the fighter. Part of me wanted to hear about the first two again at the end. Beautiful vocal.
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What a powerful lyric, and sung so tenderly, so achingly. Your voice is beautiful, and, like the restraint in the guitar, hints at that freedom of what's over the wall. Like Picasso said, "Every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once we grow up." I think that applies to much more than our relationship to making art, as you capture in that compromise of what it means to be a man or woman for society not humanity.
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This is such a beautiful song. The frisson the moment it played. Your voice, the words - everything is so perfect. I'm glad I could be a part of this process. Thanks!!!
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I love seing the results of the postcards! You got truly inspired by this post. Interesting and refreshing story
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There's a lot of power in this quiet song. I love that delicate guitar, especially as a backdrop for the soaring vocal. That's a hard-hitting lyric, too. Heartbreaking, really
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What a great write! On the surface a sad story, but underneath a message very profound.
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Such a timeless feel to this like it was some old traditional Celtic or Appalachian folk ballad that had been in that canon forever. The singing is simply captivating to the point where I had to go back for a second listen so that I could really pay attention to the intrinsic quality of the song, which I then found to be extraordinary. My compliments to the chef.
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Ooof, this so beautiful it hurts! Love your vocals over the acoustic guitar, and those lyrics are amazing, @jinx. That ending has so much sadness, but it captures the sadness of life perfectly.
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Oh, this is lovely, such a poignant and pensive set of lyrics, beautifully supported by the melody and guitar. This one’s a keeper!
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I love this lyric. Says so much with so little. And the combination of your soulful voice with the gently rolling guitar is beautiful.
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Pretty song, Jinx with touching lyrics. I should look into the postcard challenge myself.
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Very nice job on the lyrics and drawing me into the story. I love how the story makes a circle, although not the ending we want. Beautiful, poignant guitar and vocals!
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