Party of One

by @raspberry33

Skirmish: Party of One (@mardeycranbleson)
Party of One
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Liner Notes

I've done consulting and interim management work which often requires a long stretch away from home. You get to know the good local restaurants, but you do get looks walking into the mall cinema alone. This isn't finished...it probably needs a 3rd verse or a bridge or something. Collaborations welcome!

Lyrics

PARTY OF ONE (c. 2025 raspberry33)

VERSE 1:
I’m a modern day travellin’ man
Been to every state in this land
Married, but the wife stays home
Trusts I’ll neither stray nor roam
Right now, I’m a party of one

VERSE 2:
I get glances at the mall
I hear giggling in the hall
Feeling out of place in every space
Couples expected, your grace
Right now, I’m a party of one

CHORUS:
Party of one –do you think I’m a loser
Party of one – there’s a story, but it’s mine to share
Party of one – plenty of empty seats
How…about that one….

Comments

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Love that intro, got me straight away. I sympathise with the road warrior message but thankfully no more for me not I've retired. Business trips are pretty awful on your own.
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Your delivery of the title phrase is catchy. The end is a nice lift with a subtle joke.
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This is so good. First verse is a perfect set-up.
Love the chorus.
Being a party of one, I can relate.
There are times I feel uncomfortable
The music and your vocals give it extra appeal.
Do finish it. It's a keeper
This is a keeper.
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Very cool musical track and engaging melody that delivers a relatable lyric! I travel a lot for work and this is often how I feel as I go out and about exploring the cities on my own.
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A classic setup for a song — it was why you were alone at the bar, in the old blues tradition. This takes it in a new direction, but still talking about the compromises of life. I like the matter-of-fact way of explaining.
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What a fully fleshed out story and scene, thoroughly enjoyed it. I want to spend a day or two there! Love that lead synth interlude.
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I love this groove and a cool story of the travelin' man
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