Stop. Drop. I Need A F---ing Break
by @franniezest
NSFWLiner Notes
i guess i just had to get this out :| had a bad-mood day.
Lyrics
(C) (Dm) (Em) (F)
(C) (Dm) (Em) (F) (G)
Stop. Drop. I need a fucking break
Sometimes The coke Don't keep me awake
The guilt it builds, i lose my fucking mind
I can't stop now i'm falling behind
i count the days, one hundred twenty three
the only way i ever breathe free
i need to wrap the darkness up inside
compress the mess so small it can hide.
Comments
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I feel you, sister! This is what songwriting is about -- take that bottled-up, about-to-blow energy and fling it into a song! Get out of me, Satan! I love that you did this, and turned it into a very good listen -- the chugging of the guitar really drives it home. The sincerity of the vocal sells it. And you ended on a high note -- perfect!
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The flow of the lyrics sounds like this is just one page of entire diary. The moments that were most memorable for me in this tune were the details of the coke keeping you awake (and the wonder of which coke is being talked about, haha) and the 123 days.
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Rad short tune! Keep up the good work.
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Sometimes we just have to do it. We have to write the song and get it out. Your voice has a pleasant tone and, in a way, it belies the message, but in another way, I love how the pleasant tone has the edge to it. "You've pushed me to the edge!"
The words come tumbling in a way that fit what they are saying.