FAWM: "Don't Look Down"

Don't Look Down

3 weeks ago by @luxury

Don't Look Down

luxury

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Liner Notes

#punk

Lyrics

Pockets picked by a company
& when you can't afford to host company
Somebody on a screen tells you to take it out on me

Sell another piece of your humanity
To buy another hit of how it used to be
When the wolves see the money they raise the fee

Don't look down
Cause you just might find you're a little too close to the ground
I worked hard to get here & you'll never believe what I found
There's a whole lot of zombies thats shufflin around

Comments

@frozenlonesome 1w

Great song. Love all the parts and especially the fast lyrics at the start and the groovy end. The middle was nice too. The guitar and bass tones are standouts.

@sonicdeatheagle 1w

Amazing guitar work here. The fast beginning got me revved up, then the change got my attention, then another change and the outro guitar solo...so good!

@seb 2w

@luxury thanks for your comments.
As a punk rocker, I really dig this. Great job on the B contrasting sections. The lyrics are right on point and so is punk the delivery of the vocals and instruments performance. I think when you get a chance to finish it, it would be great for the fast part to come back with another verse. So run the whole cycle again. :)

@musicbykatie 2w

That tempo change tho!! I miss all the cool bands that i used to listen to and see that incorporated time sig and tempo changes into their music to amplify a message.

@toms 2w

Truly punk. I remember when there was a lot of music like this. Love it.

@onemilefinal 2w

Holy crap this is awesome. I can't decide if this should actually be three separate songs, or it is amazing as-is, with two-thirds of the lyrics occurring during the 'intro'. It's awesome!

Way to think outside the box! I need to work on that more in my own writing. Definitely dig the guitars in the final section as well. Great work!

@daveescoffery 2w

Now THIS is what I'm here for! I love the blistering fast punk followed by bluesy sounds. I'm getting Jon Spencer Blues Explosion and digging it. Great guitar work, and the lyrics are sneakily good! "Sell another piece of your humanity to buy another hit of how it used to be." Holy crap!