Saturday
by @brownium
Liner Notes
I forgot that today was the break of FAWM. Was fiddling at the piano, started this, finished it at the computer (well, I don't know that it's finished, but, it's whatever it is). Then I's like "hey, it's FAWM!"
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@abudabard12514
Very righteous, I really like that B section. Good motivic development
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Look at you go, you little Bach! I really like this. It starts out with some predictable chords and then bam! you hit us with that A7 chord and head off to very unexpected territory. Nice move! I really enjoyed the fluidity of the middle part where it's more contrapuntal. The only suggestion is to keep the movement going all the way through. M18 and 22 feel like a letdown because of all the activity that comes before it. Or as @wynia might say, "Keep that moto perpetuo perpetuing."
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I love how the RH and LH harmonize in such an interesting way. Love the moto perpetuo here, if you will. Nice job!
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This piano melody is truly captivating. The way it flows so effortlessly, with each note transitioning seamlessly into the next, creates a sense of calm and introspection.
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I especially like the melody just after the first full measure chord. And how you reverse the direction of the arpeggios, too. Nicely contrasted.
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really enjoy the chord changes & the interplay between the melodies! happy saturday! 😄
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Mike said it very well below; the song slips in and out of any attempt at categorization, which makes for a wonderfully dynamic and enjoyable experience. Keep it up!
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Nice! Starts with a 1950s kind of progression and somehow winds its way through some neat changes right into something out of Johann Sebastian Bach . So from 1950s to 1750s, kind of a Time Machine thing! Nicely done, I wish I had any kind of piano skills. !