I Dream Of You Dancing
by @tcelliott
Challenge: Andalusian CadenceLiner Notes
#murderballad #murder
It's been a while since I was known for murder ballads... 1st person murder ballads for the win!
Lyrics
I dream of you dancing
I dream of your smile
I dream of you returning
To me for a while
The heartache still lingers
The hurt will go on
Sorrow's forever
Now that you're gone
And I'm tired of living like this
I picture the blade lying right on the wrist
I call out your name
In the midst of the night
The darkness surrounds me
Hides you from my sight
But I hear your moving
Still clinging to life
I listen intently
As I sharpen my knife
And I'm tired of living like this
As I sink the knife straight into your ribs
Comments
@beacon
Great classic murder ballad format, with a cool twist. Your vocal style works for this one.
this challenge has brought some really good songs! Its a song to whirl ya girl to a first! This is really good! and then it ends - a murder ballad