I Love You Is Something With Teeth (Neither Matter Nor Void)

by @freshspotlessyouth

Liner Notes

#postrock
I struggled with this. I spent a lot of time trying to do drums, etc. Ultimately, I just wanted to get the essence of the song, the melody, if not the post-rocking sound I was aiming for. It would probably be best to start over, but I think you can hear the heart of the song in this soupy mix.

I had been reading Lucretius's On the Nature of Things:
For whatever happened was an accident
Either of the people or of the place itself
And if there had been no matter to form things with,
No place or void for things to happen in,
The flame of love, which the beauty of Helen had kindled
And fanned high in the breast of Phrygian Paris
Would never have set ablaze that savage war

Lyrics

Ever so lightly
Ever so lightly
Helen kisses me on the cheek
She leans in and nightly
Takes off her nightie
Helen kisses me on the cheek
She says the words
She says the words
I love you is something to keep
She says the words
She says the words
I love you is something with teeth

Let’s say that Helen is kidnapped
And Troy sacked
It’s people plunged into war
We’d best be careful what we say
For those people are neither matter nor void
Their homes
Their robes
And their toys
Are neither matter nor void
Matter is touched
And the void remains untouched
But those people can’t be touched anymore

They’re accidents in time and space
Matter in the void is placed
In motion
And then
One day
Swept away

I regret donuts uneaten
Not time passed
[Time is just the play of things]
We’d best be careful what we say
For those donuts are are no longer deep-fried rings
Their dough
Their holes
And their glaze
Are no longer in our way
Matter’s touched
And the void remains untouched
But those donuts won't be touched today

They’re accidents in time and space
Matter in the void is placed
In motion
And then
One day
Swept away

I regret donuts uneaten
Not time passed

Comments

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Okay my brother in Christ, you always amaze me with your storytelling and your ability to wring the poignant from the mundane equally from the erudite, but this is next level, even for you. The melody is gorgeous, your delivery is lovely, the arrangement is perfect -- I mean I *could* see it with drums, in a different feel, but what you've got here is so beautiful. I especially love that deep melody under the "I love you is something with teeth" -- with the wonderfully watery arrangement, I can't tell if it's bass or piano or distorted guitar underneath the main guitar progression, but it's wonderful, whatever it is. All the lyrics are gorgeous and wonderfully constructed, and tell a story somewhere between/all encompassing of the personal, the philosophical and the political (not trying to start any fights with anyone (though I will, if pressed), but the "let's say Helen is kidnapped" verse couldn't help but make me think of Gaza 💔) in such a touching and poignant way. And the nightly/nightie rhyme is inspired. Really fucking great stuff.
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This is truly beautiful! I have not heard anything better and some sage observations as well! top of the class Danny - this is one you were looking for! don't change a thing!
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History tells us that Helen was hot. Literature, on the other hand, shows us that Helen is hot. This is literature.

Math has something to say about donuts, but mostly uneaten ones.
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Sometimes a donut is not just a donut, and sometimes a song is not just a song, but a philosophical and emotional experience. This is a song like that. I know I'm a huge fan who is constantly praising you, and I mean it all, but truly, this is utterly wonderful.
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Really powerful stuff ... again, I'm reminded of Galaxie 500. Stripped-back arrangement works well and gives it an intimate feel. Great philosophical lyrics, mixing the profound and the prosaic. Extra points for the donut. Beautiful!
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Well, this resonates on many levels with me. The guitar is superb, and your voice is the right vehicle for these historic, cosmic, scientific, philosophical, lyrical, romantic and yummy lyrics. And I wrote a song about donut holes, so go figure. And I've been writing about matter, time and space, so go figure again. We seem to be connected on some level. Zing, zing, zing.
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Wow! This is so fucking beautiful! You are such a great story teller (although I'm not absolutely sure what this song is about ... haha! Gonna asked Mrs. Google one more time before I start writing bullshit) - ok : yes, very good lyrics!

I love how stripped back the instrumentation is: this gives the lyrics and your vocals more weight and space. And they should, because this is very, very good!
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you have used lucretius to teach me at an uneaten donut carries more weight than a kiss that launches a thousand ships. the helen verses make for a good song. the donut verses make for a good song. together they join in a perplexing union that can only be justified by the theory that both are accidents of time and space..then forever cast into the void. an ambitious song and you pulled it off. i must apply its lessons to my everyday life.
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@sbs
So soft, light, and soothing... Very special!

"I regret donuts uneaten." You've become a true Portlander. They are amazing with beer - lol!
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