5090 by FAWM: "Closin'"

Closin'

5 weeks ago by @jwhanberry

Skirmish: CLOSING (@corinnecurcio)

Closin'

jwhanberry

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Liner Notes

#skirmish #rock

Just a quick rocker on a Sunday afternoon.

Synths: Vital

Guitars: '73 Fender Stratocaster

Amp: '78 Marshall Mk II
Constructive criticism is always welcome. Tell me all about it!
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Note: Skirmish: 1 hour or so to write and record
©2024 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
All Rights Reserved

Lyrics

Closin'

Closing
I'm shutting down
Runnin' out of town
Closing
Seems I'm done
Headed for the setting sun.

Closin'
Not sure why
Didn't say goodbye
Closin'
Stuck in the past
Now it's time to get outa here fast.

'cause it's closin'
Yeah closin'
It's closin'
Shuttin' down

©2024 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
All Rights Reserved

Comments

@mandolinda 5w

Like the riff you play there. Very cool song with great instrumentals

@betoMod 5w

This is great! Not sure what you hate about it, but it's a solid banger!

@berni1954 5w

You tell an entire story with so few lyrics here! I like that pounding beat sounding like the heartbeat of your narrator as he runs out of town.

@val 5w

Cool club vibes on this. A very danceable rocker with a strong beat and cool instrumental riffs.

@musicsongwriter 5w

Very visual and believable song. Beautiful instrumentation, rocking good, singing, playing and a combination between painting the scene in the instrumental and the vocals. Strong and cool take on the prompt. Very catchy main motif and everything works so well. I can imagine your song in a rock musical with light effects included. Enjoyed my listen very much.

@sunfire 5w

Good rhythmic beat, vocals, and musical sounds. You rock! Enjoyed the sounds and listening.

@kahlo2013 5w

Yes!!! Love a closing rocker! So many cool little riffs and great strong beat! Love the punchy lyrics and the space to dance!

@hmstreetteam 5w

I think this song would make me move faster if I were working in a business that was cleaning up for the night after the customers had left. It’s got the message and the beat to go with it. A fun listen.