5090 by FAWM: "Closing"

Closing

Liner Notes

Lyrics

When there’s nothing left to say
Try to understand
With the piper left to pay
Will you take my hand?

I know I do not demonstrate
My need for contact much
But when the hour is getting late
Will I feel your touch?

I know that when I start to slip
I know you’re my best friend
I will want to feel your grip
Sometime before the end

The final journey to begin
The final story told
I can take it on the chin
With a hand to hold,

Comments

@hmstreetteam 5w

Good use of a closing-time feeling for a larger message. Good emotional writing.

@jwhanberry 5w

Good write about a time to which we all come. No whining or asking for pity, just a friend's hand to hold. Well done.

@kahlo2013 5w

This is so tender and gentle. I love your delivery and the lovely poignant sentiment of the lyric.

@sunfire 5w

I like the softness in your vocal delivery. Very appropriate on a closing we are all familiar with one way or another. Very well done, words, and playing too.

@tjeff 5w

Beautiful song about getting towards the end of life, and that it can be a wonderful thing. I'm a person that doesn't always demonstrate my need for contact, so I could relate to your lyric very much. Excellent skirmish!