Don't Believe Me Now - #CommentsFirst
by @carleybaer
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Liner Notes
This song is for the #commentsfirst challenge. It will be written based on the first few comments it receives. The title came from my first roll of the dice with Titular. Please leave a comment below, and don't be shy. I like to try new things.
Comments
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@freshspotlessyouth
There's a feeling of deep languor and melancholy, despite the frenetic pacing. I don't know how you pulled that off.
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I can’t believe it.You did this song in 30 minutes?
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Are those cicadas or fireflies that I hear?
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The backward vocal section was amazing.
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I love how the lyric reveals the unreliable narrator.
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That opening guitar lick got my attention right away! I love how you modify it for the outro -- really clever!
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I love the atonal harmonies in the B section
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My absolute favorite thing about songs that havre a title beginning with "Don't" is they usually contain solid advice for life. Yours sure didn't disappoint!
When you hit that high C on the vocals in the outro I stood up and cheered!
When you hit that high C on the vocals in the outro I stood up and cheered!
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Wow, the change of tempo between verse and chorus is genius.
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