The Girl On A Train
by @esc4p3
Liner Notes
I'm still allowing my brain to spew out lyrics and then persuading myself to be brave and actually post them.
This one popped out last night although it doesn't seem to have a chorus and also has some kind of refrain at the end. Not sure what to make of it, but you are witnessing a man learning how to write lyrics/dittys 'live on air'. So rather than me judge it and never get any further, I welcome both feedback and a collaborater who might be able to turn it into a song?!
#needsmusic #needscollab
Lyrics
I saw her once, sitting on the train
Not sure that I’d ever see her again
Killer heels, long blonde hair
Minding her business, just sitting there
Just a fleeting moment, two station stops
Her beauty so great, made my jaw drop
I tried so hard to catch her eye
My heart racing so fast, felt like I was high
Oh beautiful woman, where did you go
You got off way to soon, I just have to know
Did you see me at all, my face was all red
The thought of not seeing you, fills me with dread
I’m on the same train the very next day
If I see you again, I’ll be on heavens stairway
The train stops where you got on before
I start to sweat, my eyes pinned to the door
There you are, my heart jumps out my chest
Man this love thing, sure gets me all stressed
This time I think I just might be in luck
She looks me in the eye, I am lovestruck
I move over to sit next to her, no going back now
I turn to speak and the words come out somehow
“Hi I saw you before, do you fancy a date”
She looked at me I saw her eyes both dilate
That my friends was 25 years ago
She was my girl and I was her beau
If I hadn’t done, what I did that day
My life would have been worse, in every way
Never once hesitate
Go out on that date
Joy for you awaits
Find your soul mate
No time to ruminate
Or procrastinate
Now before it’s too late
This love is your fate!
Comments
Nice one dude!