5090 by FAWM: "Hard to Believe"

Hard to Believe

9 weeks ago by @kc_

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

#needsmusic #needscollab
Jut saw the prompt and the first line came and reminded of a book I read where the double cross got crossed again, and he got "porked" in the end.

Lyrics

Hard to Believe

V I
Hard to believe,
god so hard to believe
I bought it all,
every touch word and deed

Played for a fool
You must love to deceive
Truly a pro, so hard to believe

V II
Hard to believe so hard to believe
Not cupid's arrow
You drew a bead

Those locks of love
were cross hairs of greed
Truly a pro, so hard to believe

V III
Hard to believe, so hard to believe
My dream-girl desire
Your fire I need

I got strung up
and a cut watched me bleed
Truly a pro, so hard to believe

Outro
Truly a pro, put on quite a show
So hard to believe, Hell you don't know
Bandaged my burns, track the seeds that you sown
I'm hot on your trail and you're going down...

Comments

@kristi 9w

This has a great flow to it. The rhymes make it fly off the page. And there's attitude in those descriptions. I particularly enjoyed "Those locks of love were cross hairs of greed". Well done!

@scubed 9w

"Not cupid's arrow You drew a bead" - great line! The anger and urge for vengeance come through loud and clear. Nicely done!

@donna 9w

Ooooh, I love that fierce threat at the end. 😊

Nice tight lyric. Some fine imagery. Good take on the prompt.

@newukenewyork 9w

There's a lot of fun rhyme in this one! "a cut watched me bleed" is a really interesting line, and I also like the way it ends -- seems like it begs for a sequel!