The Song Inside the Song (Honey In My Hand)

by @newukenewyork

Liner Notes

“The Song Inside the Song (Honey In My Hand)” - #fawm 50/90 2024 song 13

Now with video demo !

These lyrics are from last year’s 50/90 but only got chords and a melody this morning. I don’t often write about writing but these lyrics came to me for whatever reason, and I thought others might be able to relate for obvious reasons. 😉

All my originals: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6mTUlPL-MmAm45IMVgat1necrh2mGnT6&si=sAdXP581ZNU__9rn

#meta #songwriting #fuc #acoustic #acousticonetake #ukulele #personwithukulele #onetake #girlwithukulele #singersongwriter

Lyrics

There’s underneath, inside of me, a stream
Sometimes I dip in, sometimes it’s like steam
The words that sink, the words that float
The ones that flee the sieve or stick inside my throat

If something lands, if it expands
I might find I have honey in my hand

What’s humming here takes guts and grit, I find,
Turning in circles trying not to mind
If I go on too long, if I sing the damn thing wrong
Asking to come upon the song inside the song

Sifting through the pages that I keep
Dredging up the dreams that come outside of sleep
What I can tend, try not to turn away
To shift into a melody the ones who’ll play

The warm air rises, so my breath
Is in and out and all that I have left

CHORUS

We’re all the onions, peeled and peeling
All the chefs, trimming and weeping
All the penitents found kneeling
Treasurers in charge of keeping

Where I am going, I don’t know
I think the sharing’s half the distance, though

CHORUS

Comments

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Nice song I can certainly relate to these Lyrics
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Oh I love this. So many good lines and images, and I thoroughly enjoy the little bluesy melodic bits you added in. I melt for a good song about the creative process, I have written too many myself. 😆 The back and forth tug between "should I write this/share this or not" is so palpable here, but all in poetry. So good.
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First up... I'm always a sucker for a chord walk down 🙂
Sung so hushed...fits for this perfectly (and yes, relatable - especially during certain months of the year...)
Beautiful.
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Sweet melody and a very pleasant listen. Glad this one was finished.
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A song within a song idea is clever! I really like the melody. It is pretty and your voice makes it sweet like honey!
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you are dipping into the river of truth. i love your phrasing and melodic sense. the google drive link worked fine, but the volume was low.
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