Shells
by @kc_
Skirmish: Hinterhand (@mashala)
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Liner Notes
German/English Skirmish
Lyrics
Wozu sollten wir noch einmal nachdenken
Kanst du sehen
Where I’m layin
What I’m sayin
Right now?
Meine worte werden gesehen
Of Phrases refreshin’
This life and a night of rebirth
Blutmond est voll
Like a battered ball
Loosed from the cast iron fire
Klingeln in den Ohren
Klingeln in den ohren
Tally shells for scoring
Tattered tales of hundreds
On the ground
To what end, this path we set
To what end, to what end
alle unsere Brüder getötet
Comments
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@gbg2016
Ooh, I like the way you used both German and English. Why choose?
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Great nuggets in here. I like the rhythm of the first verse.
Rhyming "voll" and "ball" doesn't work for me, the "o" in "voll" is short, like in "loss". I do like the coupling of "Klingeln in den Ohren" and "scoring", though, even if it is not a pure rhyme.
Rhyming "voll" and "ball" doesn't work for me, the "o" in "voll" is short, like in "loss". I do like the coupling of "Klingeln in den Ohren" and "scoring", though, even if it is not a pure rhyme.
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I like the angles of nature and uncertainty. Nice effect with the mixed languages.
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