We Almost Lost the Toki! (melody/collab)
by @danielkelly · @janeg
Liner Notes
My attempt at a bouzouki/folk setting for Jane's fabulous song about the endangered Japanese Crested Ibis (Toki) on Sado Island.
#nature #goodnewsstory #collab
Lyrics
Lyrics on Jane's post here:
https://write.fawm.org/songs/312162
Comments
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@cjk
What a great collab! As always a great true story told by Jane, and now with this fabulous music and voice. Thanks both of you for a wonderful song.
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That's wonderful, Daniel! Perfect to use an unusual instrument for a country with different musical traditions. I see you improved the lyrics in a few places and made it easy to spot a couple more I need to work on (I find it hard before there's a tune). Thank you so much!
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Great collaboration; the traditional-sounding minor/modal bouzouki works really well for this topic. and it's excellent to have an optimistic story about species decline.
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I love that bouzouki's sound! A perfect setting for a good story.
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I showed up for the good news, stayed for some fine bouzouki play - don't believe I've crossed paths with one here. Sounds great - had a nice meditative flow with the progression and vocal melody.
And the lyrics brought us a nice slice of good news. I wasn't aware of the birds plight, but I am glad to hear that "they've pulled through!"
And the lyrics brought us a nice slice of good news. I wasn't aware of the birds plight, but I am glad to hear that "they've pulled through!"