Whole

by @smudge

Skirmish: ~for just one second, I f... (@ally_nicole)
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Lyrics

Whole

I was here and there
I was everywhere
Bits and pieces
In the atmosphere

I was up and down
I was all around
Different seasons
I was drifting clouds

You took my hand
Made me understand
How togetherness
Solves everything

Comments

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@gm7
Very nice. I like the way things turned round in the last verse. Positive outcome!
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@tjeff
Very good brief yet concise lyric. Love the idea that togetherness brings the singer "back to earth" and grounded. Great skirmish!
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@wcentennial
Short and powerfull lyrics, I love how the imagery goes from vast and spread out down to a tight here and now (whole) type of feeling. Very cool, creative writing :)
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@porrectus
The rhythmic reading really flows in this touching lyric, well done.
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