Poison
by @bobbysox
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Liner Notes
This song is for the #CommentsFirst challenge (https://write.fawm.org/forums/3025). It doesn't exist yet. It will be written based on the first few comments it receives. Please leave a comment below!"
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@beacon
That was a really interesting percussion I heard. Cheese grater?
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The way you flipped the whole 'poison' concept into a metaphor for addictive love was so clever - especially that line where you compare the rush of falling for someone to getting bitten. ... yeah, we've all been there. 🕷️💔
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I love how you slowed down the tempo for the bridge. That was a great moove.
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Ahhh I am super into Spider-Man, so I really enjoyed the obvious references to that. I feel like most people would choose a snake's venom, rather than spider venom, so also super creative in that sense. Great job rhyming "spider bite" in the bridge too :)
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