FAWM: "Shiniest Shine"

Shiniest Shine

1 week ago by @kc_

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

#needsmusic #needscollab Initially made me think of Shine on Crazy diamond - Pink Floyd - and some other song... anyway... Great Prompt! Really like where it's going! Thanks!

Lyrics

V I
I’ll take the sunshine on my face
Moonshine in my glass
Race you to the river
Drop our clothes to the grass

The water’s shiny sparkles
Jumping diamonds when we dive
Even out uneven tans
Make me feel alive

C
Shine on, Shine on, Shine on my soul
Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll

V II
Feel the moonshine in my head
The sunshine round my heart
Taken all my loneliness
Tore it all apart

With the moonshine from your eyes
Those torn pieces from your touch
Sewn a quilt of happiness
And wrapped me up in love

C
Shine on, Shine on, Shine on my soul
Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll

Bridge
You’re my shiniest shine
I’ve ever seen
Gleamiest Gleam,
That’s ever been
Letting me fall into the light of your life
Melting mad shadows apart
Opened my eyes with the lovliest light
Saved my soul with the light of your heart

Outro
Oh shine on, shine on, shine on my soul
Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll
Rainbows of clouds, rolling, roll, roll

Comments

@coolparadisoMod 1w

I need some even out tan! And I’m missing my swimming pool! So thx very much, good lyric it moves around giving plenty of scope.

@tiller2 1w

This lyric expresses complex feeling that new love evokes: Joyous energy and giddiness, even silliness, the intoxication of physical desire, combined with a deeper sense of discovery and belonging. Genuine love breaks preconceptions and rules--both ours and society's--which is why love can save us. I hope you develop this further. Great skirmish.