Down to the Wire

by @mardeycranbleson

Skirmish: Down to the Wire (@mardeycranbleson)

Lyrics

i promised that i
would do something good tonight
but im
down to the wire

youve been untrue
what you want me to do
not going to beg you
down to the wire

i, im right
i, will fight

so it goes
when its done no one knows
when im done yeah it shows
down to the wire

Comments

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Great college radio vibe going on in this song.
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Good look at the prompt from several directions. I like it.
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Fabulous! Very impressive skirmish! I like the sparseness of the lyric. Love the 60s kind of vibe and your smooth sounding vocals.
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Groovy!
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Wow, this is such a great and complete song for this skirmish! Not sure what time it is for you? It’s got a real 60’s vibe to me which I love and your voice is so relaxed and calming. The lyrics are deep but catchy, it’s a skill to get that, you did it well, like The Kinks did. This has definitely inspired me to now add a demo to mine, I didn’t leave it down to the wire, it was just smack bang in the middle of school morning.
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