Copper Eyes

by @songwritingzen · @cindyrella

Liner Notes

This is another lyric that @cindyrella suggested I have a go at and like her I knew someone dear to me who had sexy copper eyes so I could I resist. I thought this song needed to be pretty slick sounding.

Lyrics

Copper Eyes
© 2024 Cindy Prince

Full of fire
Her gaze full of desire
Intense and bright

Full of passion
I wanted to cash in
That first night

She had copper eyes
What a surprise
I couldn't look away

I felt her gaze
My body was ablaze
I wanted to play

Chorus
Her spunky copper eyes
Had me hypnotized
There were flecks of gold
And her eyes told
Me a deep story
Silver streaks in her hair
I couldn't help but stare
I was in new territory

Bridge
There was nothing to tarnish how I felt
Her intense eyes made me melt

She was a new element
Sexy but elegant
I had never felt like this

Could she tell from my actions
Did she feel the same attraction
How could I miss

Repeat chorus

Comments

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Got a lovely feel to this both lyrically and musically! this could sit on plenty of those greatest hits albums! great build! awesome synth
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This encompasses the best of 80s groove pop. It gripped me from the start and the energy increase in the chorus feels great. I really enjoy the chord progression and bass in the chorus. A fantastic union of engaging lyrics and expertly crafted music. More please! 😀 I can't wait for the album!
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Great vocal performance, with a laid-back Hall-and-Oates kind of instrumental sound, really brings Cindy's lyrics to life!
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"Copper eyes" are so rare, rare, rare--but amazing to see.

Would have never thought to write a song about them--but I'm so glad you two did. This is great! ❤️
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the music makes me think of barry white, who would have had a much different vocal take on cindy's sexy lyrics. but i like the higher pitched , livelier spin on them offered by songwriting zen.
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Oh yeah! I knew you could do something phenomenal with this one! Cool you also knew someone with copper eyes. Love the feel and your vocals! Thank you!!
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