What You Didn’t Say

by @newukenewyork

Liner Notes

“What You Didn’t Say” - #fawm 50/90 2024 song 49

I am almost done completing all my lyric drafts from last year — and now I have four new lyric drafts from this year I’m hoping to get to before October 2nd, as well.

Today’s song is so much more satisfying now that I’ve set it to chords and a melody. I quite like what emerged!

3 lyric drafts left to finish from 2023…

All my originals: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6mTUlPL-MmAm45IMVgat1necrh2mGnT6&si=sAdXP581ZNU__9rn

#fuc #acoustic #acousticonetake #ukulele #personwithukulele #onetake #girlwithukulele #singersongwriter #midemfoke #sayless

Lyrics

Got stuck in your conversation pit
Time drags, your story’s thick with it
I’m waiting on your weapons-draw
My kingdom for a denouement

Keep your fork, baby, there’s pie
It might get served if you let things lie
Fell in-between your lines, headfirst,
I’m reading into pause with thirst
But something’s getting in the way
I’m here for what you didn’t say (what you didn’t say)

Hope you serve dessert, I’m caged
In some, off-putting, dry tirade
I fear your point is dulling now
Things might get sweet if you get less sour

CHORUS

I’m gonna
Blink a bit
I’m gonna
Nod at it
I’m gonna wait for
The rest of the sentence
I know you are taking attendance

CHORUS

Comments

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Clever metaphors in this and ever hopeful tone and attitude to the lyric. Good title and very relatable I think! I enjoyed the expressive vocal. Good melody and playing as well.
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Interesting silence-is-a-virtue-like write that nicely twists and turns, somehow simultaneously remaining focused and revealing through written words and music-vocal play.
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I missed this one last time around. That is some saucy double entendre! Love the uke sounds here. Well sung and played.
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Good lyrics. Everything comes together beautifully (music + vocals). Nice work!
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