Stone Soup

by @mandolinda

Skirmish: "THE STONE IN MY HAND" (@corinnecurcio)
Stone Soup
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Liner Notes

The Stone in my Hand
Opened the book "How to Write a Song that Matters" by Dar Williams to a random page. This line caught my eye
Host: @corinnecurcio
I thought of the Stone in the Soup folk tale, and used the story as my lyric. #folk #guitelele #acousticonetake

Lyrics

Stone Soup
Verse 1:
I walked into a village, weary and cold,
With nothing in my pockets, just stories untold.
The people there were guarded, doors all shut tight,
But I knew a little secret to bring warmth to the night.
Chorus:
So I dropped a stone in the water, let it start to brew,
Said, "This stone soup is magic, but it needs a little from you."
One by one, they came around, with a carrot, with a pea,
And together we made something more than we ever thought could be.
Verse 2:
They gathered 'round the fire, eyes full of doubt,
But curiosity sparked where there once was only drought.
I stirred the pot with hope, watched it start to steam,
And what began as just a stone, turned into a dream.
Chorus:
So I dropped a stone in the water, let it start to brew,
Said, "This stone soup is magic, but it needs a little from you."
One by one, they came around, with a carrot, with a pea,
And together we made something more than we ever thought could be.
Bridge:
A pinch of kindness, a dash of grace,
In that simple pot, we found our place.
What was once just a stone, is now a feast,
We shared our hearts, and our fears released.
Chorus:
So I dropped a stone in the water, let it start to brew,
Said, "This stone soup is magic, but it needs a little from you."
One by one, they came around, with a carrot, with a pea,
And together we made something more than we ever thought could be.
Outro:
Now the pot is empty, but the warmth still remains,
In the hearts of the people, who broke their chains.
For the stone in the soup, was just a start,
To show that all we needed, was a little from the heart.

Comments

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What a fun way to tell the stone soup story. You’ve taken some simple chords, but use the strumming pattern that has a little Johnson bounce along with your own vocal delivery. The imagery of the stone as the seed for people’s own deliverance is insightful.
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I love that folk tale. Good song for a community gathering.
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Wonderful storytelling of the literate kind! Enjoyed it very much.
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sounds like a classic tale from those books i read when younger! Lovely delivery Linda made listening compulsory! really complete tale! the music holds it so well!
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Lovely storytelling and magic. You have a beautiful voice and strong delivery.
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What a fun and inventive story. Really nice!
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I'm with Liz on this one. You have done a great job of telling that old tale in a fun and moving musical way.

One suggestion. The "drought" seemed forced to me.
How about:
"They gathered 'round the fire, their eyes bulging out,
But curiosity sparked where there once was only doubt.
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I really love the stone soup story and you bring it to life so beautifully! Your melody and your vocals are magic! Such a lovely bridge!
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This is awesome! The creative idea and all the ingredients of the best things!
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Excellent title! I had forgotten about that story, your song is a fantastic reminder of that tale and of the fact that anything is possible if we do it together. Good song!
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What a nice rendition of the traditional fable! I like the way the song plays up the angles of magic and community.
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