Death Valley Highway

by @tcelliott

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Liner Notes

#songfight #acousticonetake

I started this one way back on 17 July for songfight live but got stuck and was unable to make much progress until I returned home from Denver. I then promptly wrote down some more ideas and forgot about it until today. Turns out those ideas worked fine and all I had to do was add the bridge music and melody to 'get 'er done!' Turns out that going through your half finished ideas sometimes turns out okay.

Lyrics

I looked long and hard for a place to be
Somewhere that would welcome a fool like me
And I don't claim that I can understand
If there's a god or if he has a plan

The long road's been a calling
I'm wandering through the pain
Searching for the sacred
Ending up with the profane
I'd ask for forgiveness
But I've got no time to pray
Death valley highway

Heavy leaden clouds that crush the light
Make every single day seem just like night
I can taste the dust, the dirt and grit
Getting pretty tired of always feeling like shit

The long road's been a calling
I'm wandering through the pain
Searching for the sacred
Ending up with the profane
I'd ask for forgiveness
But I've got no time to pray
Death valley highway

Through the valley of the shadow of death I drive
Sometimes I wonder why I'm still alive
When you're stranded at the bottom it's a long way to the top

The long road's been a calling
I'm wandering through the pain
Searching for the sacred
Ending up with the profane
I'd ask for forgiveness
But I've got no time to pray
Death valley highway

Comments

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this fits nice on the same shelf as a bunch of tunes i got turned onto recently ... i'm blanking on who, exactly, it would be, but let's blame it on this morning's coffee fail. (i'll come back if i think of who i mean) "Searching for the sacred/Ending up with the profane" is truly the keystone here. had some fun imagining johnny cash covering this one, but in truth your gentle vocal delivery suggests a lost innocence that suits the character you've written.
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Great title hook. Love the sudden emergence of it at the end of the chorus. The rest of the chorus is good as well. Great tone and always love the acoustic guitar work.
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Too good a title to miss! You are putting in some great first verses that really scene set and then hitting us with a hookline! Very good song mate.
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Really like this. Fantastic lyrics and performed so well. It was the song title that caused me to click through - great song title and really great song
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@iveg
This is a good song for lonely-ish guy and guitar. There could have been a guy riding his horse, singing something similar back in the 1800's. It's timeless.
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@sbs
Brilliant write! Especially that chorus. You’d never know you were once stuck. All of it flows nicely.
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you are nailing it today! Love the melody of this one.
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