Summer In the Drink

by @newukenewyork

Liner Notes

“Summer in the Drink” - #fawm 50/90 2024 song 26

My tablet battery died and I ran out of breath at the same time — guess that was my last take! 😂

Today is Day 4 of @sarahspencermusic ‘s #songfancy #5in5songchallenge to write 5 songs in 5 days. I decided to take one of the word bank words (breeze) and see if I had an already written lyrical draft from last summer’s skirmishes that used that word — and I did.

The musical prompt was to write a “careful and observant melody” — I got out my baritone and worked on the verse melody with that in mind, but the prechorus and chorus picked up a different energy. I’m still fiddling with the rhythm a bit, but what else is new?!

p. s. I was briefly a teen criminal who swam in outdoor motel pools without being a guest there, but I got caught and I am reformed. 😅

22 skirmish lyrics from last year left to finish!

#fuc #acoustic #acousticonetake #ukulele #personwithukulele #onetake #girlwithukulele #singersongwriter #midemfoke #americanasati

Lyrics

In the summertime the sun blazes up in the sky
The water starts to sparkle - so do I
To fly, underwater is the air

Travel light with just a towel and a coverup
Sandals ‘cause the bright cement is rough
One dive, I’m an arrow under there

Oh-oh-oh, I’m a breeze that’s wearing skin
I always use the gate, don’t ask for permission
Oh-oh-oh, it’s a victimless sin
An empty pool’s a shame, I’m gonna get right in!

Swimming in the blue - and maybe you should too
In the evening, ooh, that’s what I’m gonna do
We only got so much of this thing called time
I’m in the drink, I’m making this sensation mine
I’m floating on by

In the winter I’m a skeleton with coals for eyes
But when the water runs I start to feel alive
That’s why
you’ll never see me on the deck

The deep is getting deeper and the wet is wet
The lounge chair’s blank distraction, I don’t get
On land I’m a drained shipwreck

PRECHORUS
CHORUS
REPEAT V1

Comments

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Beautiful vocals, I like the melody very much! "Careful and observant", for sure!
Smart lyrics with a refreshing imagery. I especially enjoy the lines where you and water are in symbiosis. Well done!
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We don't get so much sun in the UK so we go crazy when it comes out haha .Two lines jumped out at me; "The water starts to sparkle - so do I" and by contrast, "In the winter I’m a skeleton with coals for eyes". Both of these lines are me. Really peaceful melody too.
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you have made something original by bringing new images and ideas to the "summer fun" genre. i also like your brief nod to a constrasting winter, during which you are a "skeleton with coals for eyes." really excellent writing throughout and your playing and singing is so full of life.
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the imagery in these lyrics is great. you really capture the sparkly feeling of getting into the pool when the pool is the only place you want to be. i also picked up on the vowel sounds in the words ending each line for some reason -- I don't think I can even articulate why, but I like those choices.
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Pretty song I like your ukulele playing. I like the way you put the words together and they were really illustrative of the theme.
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