Five o' Clock Shadow

by @wondertruly

Five o' Clock Shadow
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Liner Notes

#singersongwriter #acousticonetake #folk

Hi, friends! Happy Monday! I'm uploading a couple songs I didn't get to post while on my Utah trip last week.

This is "Five o' Clock Shadow," which started out as the first line as an earworm circling my head. I had no idea where the song was going for most of the time writing it--which is pretty neat that songwriting can still be mysterious and a little scary at times! Looking at it as the sum of its parts, I think it's about a snarky guardian angel trying to help someone get over an existential crisis, who is starting to take on more physical attributes the longer they're on this plane (having a shadow but no body yet, etc).

Lyrics

Ooh, 5 o’ clock shadow is giving away my position
Ooh, sing a soprano, whatever it takes to get you to listen

Do I have your attention? ‘Cause I
Watched you walk the garden, waiting on a sign
Winter thaws and hardens, never a straight line

Find a place to make your stand
I will try to help you understand
Why it never goes the way you planned
The tide washes away your castle in the sand

Ooh, giving and taking, keeping nothing for yourself
Ooh, rattled and shaken, flaking away, faking the tells

Do I have to break apart? ‘Cause I

Watched you walk the shoreline, pain in every breath
Summer melts and hardens, go make your amends

Find a place to make your stand
I will try to help you understand
Why it never goes the way you planned
The tide washes away your castle in the sand

Ooh, 5 o’ clock shadow is giving away my position

Comments

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There’s so much discovery of and revealing of identity wrapped into the verses of this song. I like the various metaphors you’ve used to approach that subject. Your voice just moves smoothly throughout, sliding between the pictures that you’re painting for us.
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@sbs
Cool title, line, and melody. All so mysterious, intriguing and the vocals sell it well.
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Love the segue between the funky, staccato rhythm of the 'five o'clock shadow' lines and the more conventional sections. It's really seamless, which is a tricky one to pull off! Nice acapella bit at the end too. Great write :)
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Beautiful Vocals and great guitar. Some fantastic lines.
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it is a hard lytic to understand. so the angel is casting a shadoe but has no body? and if the angel does not depart the earth, the angel will become human? it reminds me a bit of the film, Wings of Desire, although it had a more detailed story line. As a song, though, it is compelling, both for its lyrical ambiguities and the otherworldly vocals.
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These are really cool lyrics - no analyzing - just love the way the words all sound together - really cool- Great write and performance!
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