5090 by FAWM: "The Sunset Comes"

The Sunset Comes

Liner Notes

Well, I'll come back to this one. It's got potential. Just can't seem to get the drum track right. Even though I'm a couple of days late, I really wanted to do this Skirmish. Took me a tad over an hour though. I'm actually trying to tackle 2 skirmishes at once with this one, #horror #sunset

Lyrics

The Sunset Comes

She dances 'round the fire in the nude.
Carrying her secrets to the tomb.
The Sunset comes, she flies across the moon.
She dances 'round the fire in the nude.

Her presence is felt and her magic is strong.
It keeps growing as the darkness falls.The Sunset comes, she flies across the moon.
Her presence is felt and her magic is strong.

She's whispering unto the birds and tress.
Bows in grace and drops down to her knees.
She closes the book, and she closes the doors.
Closes her eyes and comes one with the stars.

Comments

@newukenewyork 7w

I really like how you've only rarely chosen a perfect rhyme. It is so much more interesting this way. I also really enjoyed the repeated lines. Cool elements to this track. The deep bass, the tricky-souning drum, the sort of warbly notes that come in the second stanza. COol stuff!

@aneil 9w

Great Lyrics and a nice grove

@skylermf 9w

I agree you should come back to this! I love the mysterious lyrics/melody paired with the distorted guitar. Really great stuff!

@sheslin 9w

What a cool combination - horror and sunset! I really like your take on the prompt. Great guitar - cool tone. The synth adds a nice dimension. Wonderful imagery in your lyrics, and very nice story telling. Great skirmish!