5090 by FAWM: "Love in Lights"

Love in Lights

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Liner Notes

Submitting my song all of 5 minutes late. When I hosted. Oops.
Might re-record the piano at some point, might leave in the mistakes and move on as part of the charm. What else is #skirmish for?

Lyrics

VERSE 1

I started to fall for you
Around the fire light
Your beautiful smile
Outshone the moonlight
I knew you'd be worth my while
The fire rose in height
You put an arm on my shoulder
It felt so right

VERSE 2

I told you I loved you
Under fluorescent lights
Beneath the cold glow
You held me tight
We watched the falling snow
Disappear into the night
As long as you held me
It was gonna be alright

VERSE 3

I knew I missed you
Underneath neon lights
The loud noises around
Nothing felt quite right
I was swallowed in sound
My heart was tight
I'll be missing you

Comments

@mikeskliar 8w

excellent! love the whole lyric concept with the different lights, the wistful vocal, that piano which is so perfect for this- it all flows naturally and is an emotional and engaging listen. great work!

@djtjb 8w

The lyrics are vivid and emotional. Excellent use of imagery, I particularly liked the neon lights and loud noises lines. It makes you feel like you are there. The performance accentuates the lyrics wonderfully. Great song!

@scubed 9w

Absolutely beautiful! Your vocals and piano playing are gorgeous, and the lyrics are very well crafted - I love the way you built the story arc around different kinds of light.

@wacha 9w

This is a beautiful, well thought out song and super impressive for a skirmish. I love it, piano flaws and all, it's a very honest feeling demo.

@kahlo2013 9w

You convey such beautiful images and bittersweet feelings with your words! And the flow of the piano is absolutely gorgeous!

@val 10w

Lyrics tell a good story from that first moment of love to the end. You made great use of the lights theme. Piano is really nice too, and your vocal melody is lovely.

Thanks for the really great skirmish theme. I wish I had been able to do something better with it.

@hmstreetteam 10w

Good use of the theme of lights, as a point of reference in a love story. A few moments tie together to create a feeling narrative.

@musicsongwriter 10w

Very beautiful loving song. Thank you for your prompt. It has a great potential to lead to multiply choices of interpretations of the mood, style, titles, etc. I've enjoyed participating and listening to your wonderful song, singing and playing.

@marilisa 10w

Love all your different lights and how they correspond to the emotions in each verse! That piano part is awesome, too.

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Love in Lights

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