RE: Mother // 7in7 // Piano & Vox
RE: Mother // 7in7 // Piano & Vox
mrtylerlarson
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Liner Notes
Written and Recorded on July 5, 2024 by Mr. Tyler Larson
Lyrics
Parameters and Prompts: 6/8, RE: to an existing song, chorus less than 10 words
This is an RE: to the song "Mother" by Pink Floyd
Mother I'm older now
Fruition's come to pass
The bombs have all fallen
And your little boy's a mess
I'm drowning in concrete
Inside of this wall
You said not to cry
Or let my feelings show
I played by the rules
I played the fool
So i'm begging you here
Yes tonite here right now
To please set me free
From the grip that you have
'Cuz I'm gasping for air
Like a fish in a boat
But my life hasn't turned out
the way you had proposed
I played by the rules
I played the fool
I played by the rules
I played the fool
Comments
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@helenseviltwinMod
I can't say I know the song you're responding to, but your song is excellent in its own right. It feels like an appropriate response to a lot of parenting, generally.
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Interesting concept. Replying to a song. I've certainly never thought of doing that.
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