Cool title that drew me in. There's a strength in this track that is compelling right from the start, and I enjoyed the lighter trickles that emerged later.

Great sound and flow to this melody!

here is an idea, maybe for a chorus.
you can take it from here if you like it and it fits

dont know how many more verses
im gonna have to write
before i can close down this piano
and turn out the lights
i watched you fade away
like the setting of the sun
maybe ill see you again
when this song is done

I love that piano vibe!

That was lovely. Enjoyed my listen. Hopeful sounding.