FAWM: "I used to feel whole"

I used to feel whole

6 days ago by @gordon

Skirmish: ~for just one second, I f... (@ally_nicole)

I used to feel whole

gordon

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Liner Notes

#skirmish #whole
An attempt at this intriguing prompt...

Lyrics

I used to feel whole
Back in the day
You made me feel
That everything
Was going my way

Just for one second
Opportunity beckoned
Then you were gone
It was hard to hold on
Then you were gone

I tried to stay strong
But the days dragged on
The silence grew loud
Like a storm in a crowd
And you were gone

Now I search the past
For moments that last
But they're fading fast
Like shadows cast
And you were gone

(c) words and music G Todd 2025

Comments

@tjeff 6d

Interesting sound, I really like the overdrive guitar panned out wide and in the distance. The blend between that and the clean guitar sounds great! As does your vocal (love the laugh at the end). Great take on the prompt lyrically too.