Take
Skirmish: CHOOSE THE FIRST WORD (@mal70)
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Liner Notes
#freeassociation #lyricsonly #experimental
As it turns out, writing a song lyric from free association comes across very much like AI-generated content.
Lyrics
Take a look
This is complicated
You can’t go by the book
We don’t know how to play it
So take
Take your best shot
Give
Give it all you got
Then take
I said take
I mean take
You better take
Take the day off
Take a guess
Your guess will be better
Than the rest
To pull this thing together
So take
Take your best shot
Give
Give it all you got
Then take
I said take
I mean take
You better take
Take the day off
Comments
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@ayeahmur
Totally works for me. The focus and repitition on "take" is really effective, doubly so when you flip to "give". Nicely done.
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No, it's not AI, the lyrics are human and very good. I hope to hear them.
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Nice build up in the short phrases which slowly flesh out the situation. Good stuff
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I like this. Especially the command, take the day off. A just reward for giving it all you got. Nice work
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