FAWM: "plain fields "

plain fields

1 week ago by @iraferd

Liner Notes

plain fields, playing field, plane feels

song just captures how i was feeling on my flight down to queenstown i guess. probably my demo im most happy with so far

Lyrics

fields of flowers
that shout self doubt
shower me with threats of death
and im aware of what its about

but ive moved on already
ive been and ive gone
ive been stead (YES)
ive been dead already (Yes)

my thoughts keep me afloat
though this boat aint made for 2
i can see that im made for you
its us agaisnt the world girl

i wont look back if you never do
the past is behind us
youcan say weve made it through
thats what defines trust

divine lust designed us
we must return to dust
along the way i hope we suss
what we think is best for us

oh if only life was a lullaby
then maybe i could get by
nowadays it seems that its likely
more like me a firefly

sometimes i let my light shine
othertimes i try and hide
i find that sometimes i miss my daily flights

but here i am looking around
and this new found ground
im stuck listening to the sound
hoping for something profound
you say the word and ill be down
you say the word and ill be down

Comments

@iraferd 1w

thank you @fileformat i appreciate that. i feel that too i guess! ill take that into consideration for when i expand on this idea later.

@fileformat 1w

This is really good. I really like your style - I know you're looking for constructive criticism. The lead horn that comes on in is a bit plain - needs a little more reverb or something else for character. Other than that - very enjoyable.