Dear Life

by @durt3113

Lyrics

I just feel like
Life’s passing right by
I better hold on for dear life

You ever feel like
You blink and its gone
And cuts like a knife

Savor each breath
Whatever is left
Of this gift of time

Touch is all we have
When you die its gone
Hold the ones you love
While you have the time

You ever feel like
You’re done wasting time
Even in the rain

Like you savor every breath
Whatever is left
Of this gift of life

Comments

[avatar]
Nice write! Doubling the chorus (and opening with it!) makes it super hooky.

The turn in rework / rewording of the verses after the bridge grabbed my ear.
[FAWM]