S.O.S.! Song on Support

by @frankb

NSFW Skirmish: Write about the experienc... (@robinleaf) Challenge: MORSE CODE

Liner Notes

I put in a song last week for the Skirmish, "Everything is Constantly Changing". I was a bit unhappy with how it came out, so, SOS! I set my mind to improve it. Ultimately I was much happier with it, so it fits in the forum challenge, "Finish It" . #folk #guywithukulele #acousticonetake #NewEnglandFAWM #finishit

Lyrics

A rough couple days, couldn't find the ways to say what was on my mind.

My hopes and feelings in enshrined.

I wrote a song I tried to help along I was falling behind

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

A couple of rough days, that's what everyone says while put a pen to rhyme.

Your draining all your time.

With feelings and thoughts of you, concoct a new brew With words I thought were mine.

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

A rough couple of days when the rhythm fell flat. Left alone holding my hat

and that was that

Nothing rang true, like a horseshoe that flew, left me blue with all my doubts

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

I can give up now or else go on. I can find the magick

that's drawn from deep within

from under my skin, from my bones and heart I can jumpstart my chosen art.

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

S.O.S.! What can be done? Will my song see the sun?

Comments

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I really like the way you wrestled with your problem song and came up with something new!
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This song has a real folk-punk feel. Try it with a grungy guitar and scream the hook! lol Great Skirmish effort! I just finished a song for this skirmish even though it is several days late, and you explore the topic very well in your lyrics.
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