FAWM: "On the precipice"

On the precipice

2 weeks ago by @gordon

Skirmish: On the Precipice (@mardeycranbleson)

On the precipice

gordon

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Liner Notes

A slightly more literal version this time, a one-taker due to the time!

Lyrics

The wind is howling
A storm from the sea
The edge is near, consuming me
A step away from all I know
Dark and deep the water below

Should I fall or take a dive
The choice is mine alone
Unlikely to survive
My body washed ashore on the tide

On the precipice I stand
Heart in hand, fate unplanned
On the precipice I stand
Fate unplanned, heart in hand

(C) word and music G Todd 2025

Comments

@jakegiles 1d

Really lovely guitar work on this that accentuates the lyrics.

@morganxamethyst 2w

This is somehow comforting and touching at the same time. I really like the lyrics and the music with it.

@joeycyclone 2w

A dark take on the prompt lyrically but the lightness of the melody works well so that all is not lost.

@hakk 2w

The song describes the anguish of a final decision, with still some hope. The hope comes from the melody that for me sounds optimistic. I feel like that person will turn around, and understands his or hers world better, after this crucial moment. The song is a strong take to the theme!