!Yo Ma’am Oy!
by @clenig17
Challenge: PALINDROMELiner Notes
Well ended up with a snow day today. I decided to tackle the weekly challenge. I may have taken this to an extreme🤣 Other than the Rap this is entirely a Palindrome…musically, lyrically and in form. I thought let’s bring some Bartok to a pop song and I wrote this in Arch form as an homage to Bartok’s Concerto for Orchestra. I am sure no one listening would ever pick up on that but it was fun to try!
Lyrics
!Yo,Ma’am, Oy!
Yo, ma’am Oy
V1
Madam kayak Madam
Level Redder level
Was it a Cat I saw?
Was it a Cat I saw?
V2
I, man am regal;
A German am I
Too hot to hoot
Too hot to hoot
Chorus
Racecar Sagas
Sex at noon taxes
Do geese see god?
Do geese see god?
Chorus
Do geese see god?
Do geese see god?
Sex at noon taxes
Sagas racecar
V2
Too hot to hoot
Too hot to hoot
I am man regal
A German am I
V1
Was it a cat I saw?
Was it a cat I saw?
Level redder level
Madam kayak madam
Ti kcehc
Yo ma’am oy
Rap:
Look up now
come on
Too hot to hoot
Too hot to hoot
It wasn’t you
Tool
But wouldn’t you
Spill the beans
if you did really
know what it means
What it means
What it means
take a loss
On the game
piss away
All those gains
Maybe it’s just
Better that way
Comments
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I love all those changes here! Brilliant vocals and rap!
Really enjoyed this!