I am the universe
by @alyak72
Skirmish: Heaven (@atornberg)
I am the universe
alyak72
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Liner Notes
Me and heaven have a complicated history... Piano and vocals
#exmormon #deconstruction #piano
Lyrics
I can't stand
The thought of heaven
I thought I left that concept in the past
Some special tea
Took me out
And said "not so fast"
We are one
We are the universe
I am all
I am the universe
I am you
And you are me
To infinity
(But I don't want to be)
I wanted nothing after death
Nothing after my last breath
I wanted nothing after death
Comments
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@richardmasters
I am ex-religious, and I very much rate the way you explore this topic, so succinctly and elegantly expressed. I like your use of tenses in the last line, they bring nuance and resonance to your exploration. A great listen.
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Great music, and the lyrics to the point. Good skirmish.
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The intro really pulled me in and the rest of the song got me hanging in, great song!
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so straightforward and subversive, i don't think i've ever heard anyone talk about hating the idea of heaven. fab
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I like this very much! The piano repetition is insistent but fits with what feels like a powerful rant against issues with which you have struggled. Nice work!
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Wow - great stuff - the anger comes through - especially at the beginning but then you go into the universe section and it's quite breathtakingly beautiful. I love this. p.s. totally agree with the sentiment.
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Oooh that piano and melody intertwining their way into my ear. I like the play on words and the sneaky contrasts. Effective for me. I like this one!
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Hi, this is so raw and honest. i loved the melody and you have a cool voice.
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This is fabulous and I love how the vocals end kind of abruptly and then that low piano note just holds out. Great skirmish!
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Kinda catchy and upbeat contrasting the end of it all. Sounds good.