Is It A Ghost?

by @troubadette

NSFW Skirmish: Ghost (@wylddandelyon)

Liner Notes

NSFW for an artistic F-bomb that I honestly feel is extremely justified. My first skirmish this FAWM, huzzah! #ghost #acousticonetake

Lyrics

I got home from work and I took off my shoes
And thought that I left them right next to the door
I hung up my jacket and put down my bag
And then suddenly my shoes weren’t there anymore

It’s funny, I swear
“I left them right there”
Is the thought that I find myself thinking the most
And in all my blundering
I can’t help wondering
Is it my ADHD or is it a ghost?

So I opened the fridge for no reasonable reason
And stared at the shelves for a moment or two
It’s not like I thought that my shoes would be in there
It just kind of felt like something I should do

It’s funny, I swear
“I left them right there”
Is the thought that I find myself thinking the most
And in all my blundering
I can’t help wondering
Is it my ADHD or is it a ghost?

If it’s a ghost, I have so many questions
Are you being a dick? Are you asking for help?
Is it weird being dead? Did you die in my house?
Or do you not exist and I’m basically haunting myself?

So I picked up my bag and I took it upstairs
Scrolled through my phone, kind of checking for news
I went back downstairs to play video games
And right there by the door I saw my fucking shoes

It’s funny, I swear
“I left them right there”
Is the thought that I find myself thinking the most
And in all my blundering
I can’t help wondering
Is it my ADHD or is it a ghost?

Comments

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Congrats on your first skirmish!! Such clever and light-hearted lyrics. I love your melody and vocals - wonderful lyrical pacing and such nice forward momentum in your song. "Is it my ADHD or is it a ghost?" - what a great line. This song made me smile the whole way through - amazing skirmish write and beautiful acoustic one-take!
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Ha, this is adorable and made me laugh. You have a beautiful voice that really catches the attention from the first syllable. Really great song!
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This is so great! I love the clever lyrics and your delightful vocal delivery. I so relate to this song - I have ADHD, and I can lose an object when I'm in the middle of using it. And yes, your F-bomb was an artistically perfect choice.
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I love that bridge! This is so much fun. And still, none of your questions are answered! Tricksy ghosties, hiding your shoes, but only for a little while. Wait until tomorrow, what might disappear then? First skirmish of the challenge, huzzah indeed. Thanks for coming to my skirmish!
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Pfff. The bridge made me snicker. "Is it weird being dead", etc. was a fun little diversion from the theme. But yes, this is definitely relatable. You sound great as always, and I enjoyed the Celtic ballad-y sort of rhythm. F-bomb accepted.
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I really enjoyed the sly storytelling here, and your voice is lovely! There's a wonderful gentle humor here, and yes, that F-bomb is perfectly placed and executed. Listening to this made me very happy!
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You tell that ghost, if you have time to hide my shoes, you have time to fold laundry.

I like "haunting myself" as a hook.
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Relatable! I know I've wound up "basically haunting myself" (great turn of phrase) here and there. Clear, humorous narrative and warm sound.
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