Pieces of Summer

by @misfitgrit

Pieces of Summer
misfitgrit
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[Verse]
When I get to LA
I will have to deal with me
Better not to even play
Then feel the sting of losing's death ray

[Chorus]
Picking up pieces
Pieces of the summer
Honed razors
Blazing in my heart
Picking up pieces
Pieces of the summer
Shred my heart-art-art-art

[Verse]
Went and cried for two whole weeks
They questioned me about the shrieks
In dark sunlight all is bleak
Blood gushing into a leak

[Chorus]

Rode the metro to a rave
Lured by darkness from my cave
Amplified my beta waves
New romantic feelings saved

[Chorus]

[Solo]

[Chorus]

Comments

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@andygetch
Great starting song and glad to see you here!
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@chris_buono
Quite an emotional write of introspection, realization, and revelation here that has ability to toss much appeal to those other than just the storyteller.

Dug the chorus! It kicked w delicate sadness wrapped in clever exposition that stitches together well ur verses of puzzlement and telling perfection. Nice job!
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@coolparadiso Mod
I really like this one! very pretty melody and that insistent beat and a clever vocal over the top! well done - oh and welcome to 50/90
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@lbrewington
My three favorite lines where I will have to deal with me, Lured by darkness from my cave, and Honed Razors Blazing in my heart. Also was digging the background beat and feels like it adds to the vibe of a LA summer song.
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