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Midnight Visions

10 weeks ago by @rocketgrrrl

Midnight Visions

rocketgrrrl

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Liner Notes

Here is my #firstfruits offering. I remember waking, years ago, with the moonlight filling my bedroom. I walked to the window and looked down on the silver yard outside, filled with my own secret thoughts and yearning for impossible things.

I am glad they came true.

#folk #fantasy #girlwithpiano

Lyrics

Moonlight Visions
Jemma Kline

I wake, awash in silver light,
Its touch now spreading through our room.
You sleep, so quiet by my side.
I hear the whisper of the moon.

Moonlight visions,
Midnight dreaming.
Without shadows,
All is clear.

Outside, I find the hidden stair,
The stones abandoned years ago.
I climb to reach the midnight air,
Then sit upon the argent throne.

Moonlight visions,
Midnight dreaming.
Without shadows,
All is clear.

Transformed I rise into the skies,
With shining wings now opened wide.
My silenced voice at last can cry,
As on the nighttime winds I fly.

Moonlight visions,
Midnight dreaming.
Without shadows,
All is clear.

Comments

@philkmills 10w

I like the structure: putting images in the listener's mind with the verses and applying a reassuring positivity to them in the chorus.

@coolparadisoMod 10w

didnt we all? some fine lines here! and a good use of descriptive lines! nice one

@gfandme 10w

"Without shadows, All is clear." Love this line, great song!

@andygetch 10w

Fabulous imagery. The video is playing in my head.

@gm7 10w

Great song prompt..sometimes they are just outside our window. Very nice playing and the melody is soft light moonlight!

@odilongreen 10w

I like how this is both delicate and energetic, with the feeling of longing and hope palpable. This really soars!

@sheslin 10w

Cool song concept! It feels thoughtfully dreamy with a sense of yearning approaching joy. Love the chorus - "without shadows all is clear" - what a great line. I like the dramatic bridge and making that last chorus rise.